literature

just a feeling

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Shards-of-Affliction
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Literature Text

There's no telling the words in my heart
it ceased to beat the moment I fell apart
I have no regret cept words unsaid
no lies to be told or excuses to be said,

I have in this place a hollow spot
a dark hole that seethes and rots,
a change in mood a flow of attitude
a mark of hate of loathing too great

No road can lead me out
the solitary life brought forth en route
but time is my master
broken dreams made disaster

I find no peace no solace in this place
no end to this misery just longing and disgrace
there is no way to shed this skin
no relief only grief
so let this end the way it should
with me dead and no more hurt.
A man can make you feel many things. How unfortunante that not all of them tend to be wonderful.
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mandy-chan-luvs-toya
well feelings of pain and loneliness and the like are strong emotions none the less and honestly i typically prefer them...especially when reading. i relate to this piece in my mind and i like the way you wrote it. i enjoy when things lack a perfect set rhyme scheme as well. i wish i could write them tho lol